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Hi everyone,
PETRA's rewrite is finished, and it needs to sit for a few days. At present the relationship between the hero and heroine is resolved in Ch 20, but the surrounding storyline involving other main characters continues for another 10 000 words. (2 chapters)
I think, if you wait 20 chapters for some loving, you might like that to be the climax. It's the work of a moment to change it about, and settle the political ructions BEFORE our sweet priestess gives in to her heart.
What do you think? Is the relationship THE story?
Would you keep reading to see how it ends, or just be annoyed by extra details?
letitia.coyne@gmail.com
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